tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5035303649437804445.post482620846320869628..comments2024-02-16T04:51:34.314-06:00Comments on Marsha's Musings: You’re So DeepMarsha Sigmanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11095210839900479297noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5035303649437804445.post-9493835105772428882011-04-27T06:12:27.740-05:002011-04-27T06:12:27.740-05:00I think it's all about the internal struggles ...I think it's all about the internal struggles that a character has that manifests into things that others witness. Afraid of being alone, being possessive or needy etc. These are definite in-depth things because it leads back to a bigger issue. Something that the character has may be been struggling with for a long time.D. U. Okonkwohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12900694425526387930noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5035303649437804445.post-35849393782896672902011-04-26T19:23:21.779-05:002011-04-26T19:23:21.779-05:00I think you nailed it. It's about the little ...I think you nailed it. It's about the little things, those little quirks that add a dose of realism. I don't have any lesbians or cripples in my story but I do have a villain who uses hand sanitizer religiously.Jennifer Hillierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15783975547643539868noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5035303649437804445.post-31387290306829888942011-04-26T14:52:52.182-05:002011-04-26T14:52:52.182-05:00Man, I wish I knew. I try to add in some bad with ...Man, I wish I knew. I try to add in some bad with the good, some honorable behavior with some selfish stuff. But I've had some people read my pages and not like my character very much because of a couple of choices she makes in the first chapter. It's part of the story set-up, though, so I don't know what to do about that other than try and show the reasons for her doing what she does more clearly. <br /><br />Sigh. I like her just fine.Luanne G. Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15762881276976395955noreply@blogger.com